Friday, January 25, 2013

A Sky's Embrace

written for Real Toads

She flipped her head

And dangled a twig with her hand

From which then bloomed a flower

Connected to her hair

Her hair was made of leaves and flowers

and she, was walking on air

The moon she could pull down with a string

and talk to it for hours

For everyone had a moon over their heads

To pound and knead and knit 

To keep their memories fresh and neat

A tiny star would sprinkle the air each time someone smiled

It'd fly a distance when the smile turned into frown

the ground was carpeted with friendly wings

that'd lift one from leaf to leaf

Leaves that were haven where one sleeps and eats

when the sun it sleeps and forgets to shine

and sing to the beat of forgotten tales

A rainbow lit every corner of the sky

so bright it could illuminate the souls of passers-by

One day this girl saw a boy cross the arrow of stars beneath a bow

She saw his heart filled with her name, 

her images even her shadow

He flew to her feet lifted by the friendliest of wings

He moved his lips and out came tiny stars

That circled her chest then entered her heart

Alas the stars allowed her heart to beat 

and blood filled every hollow of the cupid's pick

their feet fell on the ground, the wings gave way for them to seek

their own paradise and a home to keep

where they no longer could command their moons

but have to wait for the sun to set for it to peek

Her leafy head turned into mane

Her lips caressed such manly flesh

and they both fell into that world

where nothing is forever

yet LOVE it is told....

to keep LIFE as beautiful as a sky's embrace....

image source: free wall papers 


happily joining 

Kerry's Wednesday Challenge ~ Worldbuilding at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads


16 yorum:

  1. ahhhhhhnother beautifully written poem again Zen, may they keep life as beautiful as sky's embrace.

  2. You have a wonderful imagination. I particularly liked this idea:

    The moon she could pull down with a string...

  3. "A rainbow lit every corner of the sky

    so bright it could illuminate the souls of passers-by

    One day this girl saw a boy cross the arrow of stars beneath a bow

    She saw his heart filled with her name,

    her images even her shadow"

    love this from the title, to the body and the image. So lovely!

  4. So beautifully written!! Loved it Zen. You must write more poetries :)
    Have a happy week :)

  5. Beautiful words written by equally beautiful person. Grabe! Ang galing! I'm a fan talaga.

  6. Did I ever tell you that you are very talented? The poem is sweet, beautiful, and dreamy, Zen!

  7. I always love the poetic side of you sis! Such a beautiful composition.

  8. Ang lalim ng mensahe, halos muntik na akong malunod. Great imagery and nery fluid flow. Wala na akong masabi pa sa message, tso touching and heartfelt. Isa kang makata, kaibigan, sana makagawa rin ako ng ganitong tula. ang alam ko lang kasi puro kenkoy poem.

  9. You are very talented in weaving words with hidden meaning like an abstract painting of an artist.

  10. I love what your composition is! You are a brilliant poet!

  11. beautifully written poem... i hope i can be as artistic as you po.. cheers! :)

  12. Ah, poetry! =) Isa sa mga greatest frustrations ko.. Hehehe Ang galing nyo po! Saludo ako sa pagkakagawa ninyo ng poem na 'to! =) Keep on composing more!

    I <3 it!
    so filled with wondrous imaginative images!
    You are a wonderful poet :D
    This could be a story or a book!

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