tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post1586217955510030638..comments2024-03-13T23:12:55.462-07:00Comments on The Letters In November: BLUE SUNSET- A Novel in the MakingZenserlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10245188930870716295noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-29939653520299559612014-01-27T20:48:43.691-08:002014-01-27T20:48:43.691-08:00Your story is full of emotion. But I hope you'...Your story is full of emotion. But I hope you'll not be offended if I comment on the overuse of ellipses. <br /><br />But I think it will have to go through the editing process before your book will be published. <br /><br />Way to go!Bjorn Mystichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05688659460728397231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-4896416321437236522014-01-27T05:23:14.729-08:002014-01-27T05:23:14.729-08:00I cant wait to read this in paperback!!!I cant wait to read this in paperback!!!Annahttp://www.louiseinthehouse.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-84335828929133899012014-01-26T18:29:41.189-08:002014-01-26T18:29:41.189-08:00Whenever I read a letter, I have to read it verbal...Whenever I read a letter, I have to read it verbally and this one touched my heart. You perfectly described the feeling of being in love: The awkward moments, the kiss, almost every emotion of this letter was all intact! You made every reader draw closer and feel the same way with you. You did great on this letter and please keep writing! :)Jonas Labagalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00998310326123775300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-36686613604804065262014-01-26T17:59:04.189-08:002014-01-26T17:59:04.189-08:00go write the novel and dedicate it to me. hahahaha...go write the novel and dedicate it to me. hahahahahaha. labyew! ang walang kamatayang one great love. sometimes i wonder, is it that really great? LOLCherryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05898459781701768602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-40064440316246111582014-01-26T13:54:43.985-08:002014-01-26T13:54:43.985-08:00Indeed, you have a great passion of writing. It sh...Indeed, you have a great passion of writing. It showed how you put all together and make the readers think. Impressive!mhie@smarlkhttp://smarlk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-65771157041591132792014-01-26T07:05:38.621-08:002014-01-26T07:05:38.621-08:00I love it! It's very emotional! The word blue ...I love it! It's very emotional! The word blue and the word sunset all gives us the feeling of nostalgia.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17770327133566358014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-48958425461325333172014-01-26T06:04:55.248-08:002014-01-26T06:04:55.248-08:00It is indeed a wonderful story to continue writing...It is indeed a wonderful story to continue writing and publish it Doc :-) You are one indeed amazing author :-) Keep it up :-) Jessica Cassidyhttp://www.e-newswithjessy.info/2014/01/unconditionally-by-katy-perry-is-my-favorite-song/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-36579276437413014832014-01-26T01:23:41.973-08:002014-01-26T01:23:41.973-08:00So pure and beautiful, Kulasa zen - straight from ...So pure and beautiful, Kulasa zen - straight from your heart going into mine. I could feel the emotions, the pain and the joy, and picture every scene with every word that you wrote here... you are gifted and blessed to tell tales that can move.. Please do continue with the story and please don't keep us waiting for too long, can't wait to read more.Artihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606566484548310912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-84841158204103461172014-01-26T01:21:50.260-08:002014-01-26T01:21:50.260-08:00So pure and beautiful, Kulasa zen - straight from ...So pure and beautiful, Kulasa zen - straight from your heart going into mine. I could feel the emotions, the pain and the joy, and picture every scene with every word that you wrote here... you are gifted and blessed to tell tales that can move.. Please do continue with the story and please don't keep us waiting for too long, can't wait to read more.Artihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606566484548310912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-23246611827301690062014-01-25T22:36:49.787-08:002014-01-25T22:36:49.787-08:00emotions and sentiments well expressed, i suggest...emotions and sentiments well expressed, i suggest for a continuance :)Joyhttp://www.joysflair.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-26915139784768464062014-01-25T21:21:47.891-08:002014-01-25T21:21:47.891-08:00I can never write with as deep an emotion as you d...I can never write with as deep an emotion as you do. You should keep at it and continue. I'll be waiting for the continuation. Nakaka-in love!Julianahttp://julianaslair.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-4044616153674487162014-01-25T20:39:11.246-08:002014-01-25T20:39:11.246-08:00I agree with Ate Betchai, you are such a loving s...I agree with Ate Betchai, you are such a loving soul Doc Zen. You can really pour emotion with your stories, love this one!Chubskulit Rosehttp://www.sailorsmusings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4641784269879964446.post-41294722914697885232014-01-25T19:45:52.758-08:002014-01-25T19:45:52.758-08:00Yore and Blue, a beautiful love story that has no ...Yore and Blue, a beautiful love story that has no end ( yet? ) that I could not forget, and am glad for the story being told here again. they say, those who could write with deep emotions such as this, love so greatly in their heart. betchaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04754061874315713589noreply@blogger.com